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<blockquote data-quote="Sticky Stokes" data-source="post: 2074416" data-attributes="member: 24533"><p>Nice article,</p><p></p><p>I would change:</p><p></p><p>"Furthermore, it can be seen that, from FBI crime statistics, that rifles account for only 2.7% of total murders in the US from 2007 to 2011."</p><p> </p><p>to read </p><p></p><p>Furthermore, according to FBI crime statistics, rifles account for only 2.7% of total murders in the US from 2007 to 2011.</p><p></p><p>and </p><p></p><p>This attention further encourages the psychopathic killers to become dark celebrities and shows them exactly what the “popular” weapon to use is.</p><p></p><p>to </p><p></p><p>This attention further encourages the psychopathic killers to become dark celebrities and informs and encourages them to use the “popular” weapon.</p><p></p><p></p><p>you need to insert the word "be" in this sentence below</p><p>Not every knife, blunt object, or handgun murder is reported in the national news, but now the rare AR-15 crimes will <u>be</u> politicized at every opportunity.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Sticky Stokes, post: 2074416, member: 24533"] Nice article, I would change: "Furthermore, it can be seen that, from FBI crime statistics, that rifles account for only 2.7% of total murders in the US from 2007 to 2011." to read Furthermore, according to FBI crime statistics, rifles account for only 2.7% of total murders in the US from 2007 to 2011. and This attention further encourages the psychopathic killers to become dark celebrities and shows them exactly what the “popular” weapon to use is. to This attention further encourages the psychopathic killers to become dark celebrities and informs and encourages them to use the “popular” weapon. you need to insert the word "be" in this sentence below Not every knife, blunt object, or handgun murder is reported in the national news, but now the rare AR-15 crimes will [B][/B][U]be[/U] politicized at every opportunity. [/QUOTE]
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