Hope this is not a new trend....

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ignerntbend

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They'd be wearing their hoodies with sweat pouring down their faces and stinking of sweat like week old gym socks. They liked the hoodies because of the big front pockets and they often dropped small shop lifted items into each other's baggy hoods.
This is vivid prose. It makes the reader see, smell and feel the scene:preocc: like he's ackcherly in the story.
 

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